Neon Knights is now live on DriveThruRPG!!!
That's it, that's the post. I worked hard over the past couple of weeks, I finished the game, and I posted it. Feeling pretty good about that. Now I can rest a bit, then back to work on all the other games.
I may have bitten off more than I can chew here. Lots going on, and (self-imposed) deadlines adding pressure to it. At this moment I am working on revisions for Werewolves of London (trying to get it up to where it's worth showing to publishers at PAX Unplugged, even if it's not 100% done at that point), revisions and layout for Neon Knights (I'd really like the flyer I give out at PAXU to list it as "available now" instead of "coming soon" for the third year in a row), and also a surprise round of revisions on Under a Violet Moon (publishers are interested but want to make changes), and with all that I'm still trying not to let Dolomball fall off the radar but it still needs a decent amount of work as well after the last playtest.
And that all has to fit around the day job, and family, and not letting the house fall apart, and whatever else pops up at any moment. At least I'm not sitting around getting bored...
Finally had time to revamp Werewolves of London and bring it out for testing. Biggest change coming from the previous playtest was that I added rules for border skirmishes with other players - reducing their investments in the contested territories or preventing them from scoring those territories at the end of the game. I also changed some rules for scoring, for where you can invest money, and for what happens when the police investigation progresses.
Overall conclusion from today's test is that it's moving in the right direction but still has plenty more moving to do. It does feel more wolfy now, but needs to also feel more businessy, and find the right balance of the two aspects. The test players gave me some good ideas based on what they were expecting from the pitch, and how that differed from what I actually had, so that gives me a really good sense of what to aim for with the next round of revisions. We also talked a lot about building around the day/night contrast; I'm kind of kicking myself that I hadn't thought about that more explicitly before since it is rather central to the whole concept of werewolves but again, it does give me some ideas to play with.
And it also led one of them to come up with a new tag line that I'm definitely stealing - "outbid them during the day, outbite them during the night"
Recurring feedback that I've gotten from readers is that, since I'm pitching this game as "heavy metal," they want to feel that in the rules. And in particular, in the PCs' core stats. The knightly virtues that I have there right now do the job well enough for covering different kinds of actions but not for conveying the desired tone of the game. After a lot of back and forth, and a lot of beating my head against various proverbial walls, I've maybe finally solved this one. Here they are:
You act with ...
Passion when your emotional intensity is front and center
Restraint when you carefully collect information and balance risks and rewards before taking action
Instinct when you go with your gut and don't bother waiting for confirmation
Sleight when you use stealth, subterfuge, or misdirection
Accord when you act on your understanding of others around you
Force when you rely on the raw strength of your body or mind
I don't think it makes to continue calling them Virtues. I could go back to Approaches, which is the default term from Fate Accelerated, but that also lacks flavor. Maybe this will be the next big annoying thing for me to resolve?
Werewolves of London playtest today. I did solve the specific problem of turtling being the optimal strategy, but now there are bigger issues I need to address. Feedback from both players was that they loved the theme and premise of the game, but it didn't feel vicious enough - not enough meaningful interaction with each other, not enough tension around the police investigation, and, apart from me saying that Meat represents what you get from hunting for humans, nothing that actually felt like being a werewolf. I have some ideas starting to come together for how to deal with this, but it's definitely going to take some work. Let's see what happens over the next month or two...
In other news, PAX Unplugged ticket has been purchased. I will be there that Saturday, in the Unpub room, hopefully with a much improved version of Werewolves of London for people to play.
I was supposed to have a Neon Knights one-shot (and unofficial playtest) yesterday with a couple of people who had expressed interest in the game. Spent the week prepping an adventure for them, since our plan was to skip session 0 and get straight into the action. And then my internet crapped out and we had to cancel (trying to connect to Discord voice chat on my phone was iffy at best, definitely not something we could all tolerate for 2-4 hours). In the meantime we talked a little about renaming some of the stats to sound more Metal. I've thought of some terms I could maybe use, and now I'm on the fence between being more thematic vs being easier to understand right away. I'll get that figured out eventually.
On the other hand, since I couldn't spend my evening running an RPG, I did spend it finally updating Werewolves of London. In the original playtest only a few of the territories had special abilities, so yesterday I wrote up a bunch more. And I made sure that some of them overlap or otherwise conflict with each other. Next step is to redesign the cards so things are easier to see when they're all in your hand instead of neatly laid out on the table. Hoping to have everything done to be able to run the game again next weekend.
Dolomball playtest today. The new "speed" mechanic worked out well - that was the change I made after last time to replace the rock-paper-scissor system for resolving ties. Cards are still played simultaneously, but now they resolve in speed order instead of simultaneously, so that takes care of figuring out who gets to the ball first, or who can block someone else's movement. Besides that, the other players today liked the core of the game but felt like it was more complex than it should be for the kind of game that it is, and that scoring is too slow (I'll refrain from making any soccer jokes here). Also, they both wanted to be able to plan further ahead and be able to make better predictions about opponents' actions. Suggestions for me to play around with included making the board smaller and separating movement from action cards. Need some time to decide what I'm actually going to do with that, but I think it is worth exploring. Let's see what the next few weeks bring...
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In other news, this week I started doing layout work for Neon Knights. It is simultaneously tedious and exciting. But I think this is going to end with a book that makes me look only 50% amateur instead of 100%. Maybe even only 25%, especially if I get in-document hyperlinks to work correctly.
